Tuesday, 14 November 2017

The key

The Key by Zack

  • Beginning, middle and end
  • Simple, compound and complex sentences
  • Choosing the best possible words
  • Lots of rich details
  • Punctuating sentences (CAPITAL letters in the right place, full stops... )
  • Paragraphs
  • Use your planning and revising learning muscles
Once upon a time I was walking along the beach by myself and I saw something shimmering in the distance so I ran and ran but I never found anything. Suddenly a brit gold key shimmered rit in front of my eyes I thort I should pick it up but what if it was a trap well I didn't' fall for it. So I ran home thinking about what that key led to, was it a cave or maybe a underground bunker I don't know what it led to?

Later that night I could not sleep because I could not stop thinking about the key. I jumped out of my bed then I slipped my slippers on  and I quietly sneaked out my bedroom door and rushed down the stairs grabbed my dressing gown on and  snuck out the door.

Then I walked down the to the beach and found the key. I picked it up and ran as far away as possible. I sat down on a nearby rock steering down at the sparkling key. And I let out a long si. What should I do with it but then I noticed something on the key. It was a little dusty so I blow the dust of and there was a pirate symbol on it.
I walked home and on the way I found a shortcut so I went down the track and I tripped over a root in the ground.
And fell of a cliff and I got knocked out.

I la on the ground still as the ground and till I finally woke up and I was sitting on something  it was a key howl I thought to myself could it be.

Friday, 22 September 2017

vaporware Art2

You should buy my calendar because it is cool because you will never see a another one like it.

Thursday, 21 September 2017


I was walking along the beach and then I saw something shimmering in the distinc so I ran and ran and I never came axos it and then rit in front of my eyes there was a brit gold key the end

Monday, 4 September 2017

my soccer

                      this is me with the ball in I am about to get a goal
                                         this is me passing to my team mate
                                          I am focusing
                                          this is me looking to pass
                                          this is me kicking the ball up fled
                                          I got player of the day

Wednesday, 23 August 2017

A TIME WHEN I WAS ... ( penalty shot)

It was a cold morning and I was 7 turning 8 I was playing soccer and I got penalized in   right in the goalie box. So I had a penalty shot. I felt so anxious. To get it over with. but we  all new that I would miss it. as the whistle blow. I closed my eyes and hit the ball. It went quiet for a second and then I heard people cheering and trumpets blowing. I opened my eyes and I saw the ball in the net and then the final Buzzer went off buzzzzzzzzzz

We had won the championship game.